Malo e lelei Etena. Thank you for sharing your writing. I like how you started your writing with there being a blinding bright thing. This made me curious to want to keep reading to find out what it could of been. I wonder if you ever make it back down the mountain?
Malo e lelei Etena. My name is Mele i attend to Saint Pius X Catholic School. I really like your 100 word story about mountains and how you climbed a mountain. But you have bloged this twice so i would take one down. But other than that. Keep up the Good work
Hi Etena, my name is Ebad and I really like your 100 word story I liked how you planed your story like Platon said question how long did it take to plan?
Thanks for sharing, Etena, a great introduction to a story, I can't wait to find out what happens next, I wonder who or what made the passageway?
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Etena. Thank you for sharing your writing. I like how you started your writing with there being a blinding bright thing. This made me curious to want to keep reading to find out what it could of been. I wonder if you ever make it back down the mountain?
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ReplyDeleteI really like your work because how you wrote about volcanoes. Keep Up The Great Work!
Malo e lelei Etena.
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mele i attend to Saint Pius X Catholic School. I really like your 100 word story about mountains and how you climbed a mountain. But you have bloged this twice so i would take one down. But other than that. Keep up the Good work
Hi Etena, I like how you planed your story and then wrote it another way but it had the same meaning. Was it hard to plan it? BLOG YA LATER!
ReplyDeleteHi Etena, my name is Ebad and I really like your 100 word story I liked how you planed your story like Platon said question how long did it take to plan?
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